We have not gone, we two.
It's just we've been away,
Dave working in the dark,
Pete by a pebbly bay.
A sure entrant for most dire poem of the month
It's just we've been away,
Dave working in the dark,
Pete by a pebbly bay.
A sure entrant for most dire poem of the month
3 comments:
well now, it rhymes, it has rhythm, it imparts information in a clever way, and it's not prose - I'd say you've writ a poem
Ah, Pauline, but feel its shallowness.
I missed it - I like the feel of the two of you off on individual pursuits but still here, do you see?
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